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Crit on my comics?, my comics!| Phantom_Penguin |
Posted: January 28, 2006 10:48 pm
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I never got them really looked over on SJ, and theres a smaller group of people here so i might get a response. My two comics:
Penguin News: politcal comic Falling Stars: War Drama links in the sig. i wold love it if you helped me out! --------------------  |
 
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| DoktaLuv |
Posted: January 29, 2006 01:25 am
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I dont like it, but then again, I don't like manga.
hahahaha j/k I like The Penguin News, keep it up! I'd say potentially coloring it would help out a lot, but it's good the way it is. The writing carries it a lot -- and the recent events is always a sure topic to keep people coming back. I haven't looked at Falling Stars yet, I didn't even know you'd started drawing it  ....gimme a sec!  I'll post on that one later. |
 
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| Phantom_Penguin |
Posted: January 29, 2006 03:18 am
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yay
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| McEwin |
Posted: January 29, 2006 08:43 am
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Hmmm... crits... crits... "you kick ass"?... yes, that is what I was looking for.
-------------------- Bunnies!
*cough*... I mean kitties.... |
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| Phantom_Penguin |
Posted: January 31, 2006 12:39 am
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heh for some reason i always thought you hated my comics.
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| DoktaLuv |
Posted: January 31, 2006 01:20 am
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I'm not even going to go into the reasons as to why you could think that.....
 The last one was good, gets the mind workin'. |
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| Phantom_Penguin |
Posted: January 31, 2006 04:21 am
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Mostly because im surronded by idiots. I live in a barracks with 3 other guys, all who
1)are not politcal 2) cant get into a storyline. idiots is a strong word..but. Lets just say i wouldnt want them doing anything else besides blowing stuff up for a living. -------------------- |
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| DoktaLuv |
Posted: February 04, 2006 06:33 am
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The coloration in your strips is really going awesome -- I think it helps out a lot and adds a lot of visual appeal to Penguin News.
Falling Stars is definitely a more somber comic, I think, with a lot of influx of emotions -- could be a real rollercoaster ride! |
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| Phantom_Penguin |
Posted: February 08, 2006 06:37 pm
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Im trying with falling stars. But right now im haveing a hard time. mostly because i dont have the time to work on my comics as much as i use to, so its not updating as much.
Normal FS comic takes about 3 hours from pencil drawing to the end of photoshoping. normal Penguin news takes about 1 hour tops from pencil drawing to posting.  So PN gets done more often. -------------------- |
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| Staniel |
Posted: February 09, 2006 05:14 am
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Content wise, and lately art wise this comic is good, but i've been saying that for many weeks now.
The only thing that I could offer up in critique is that there are quite a few spelling mistakes and the text isn't centralized and spaced in the bubbles very well. I'm not sure if it's such a big problem, but I think if the text was cleaned up a little bit the whole thing would have a more proffessional general air, and the messages might ring better. Realistically though, you're kicking the ass of some other stuff out there. -------------------- -- Oh Mother, I can feel the soil the falling over my head. --
Come to my pretention-fest. http://wiggleyourperception.blogspot.com http://nohorsetown.smackjeeves.com http://ithaca.smackjeeves.com |
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| Phantom_Penguin |
Posted: February 09, 2006 04:59 pm
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Thanks! I just wish the folks and DD thought the same
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